Showing posts with label excerpt. Show all posts
Showing posts with label excerpt. Show all posts

Friday, October 5, 2012

Read this short excerpt, tell me what you think?!?!?!?!?


Question


Read this short excerpt, tell me what you think?!?!?!?!?
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Answer


I have been following your story since day one and I am still amazed at how well you write. GIRL, you need an agent ASAP so I can read this book already! I know you will go far in your career as a writer. brbrAs for the excerpt, i think its breathtaking. The way you can weave emotion through your sentence structure is true talent. I can feel the anguish Katia is feeling as she watches the flames devour her life and family. I truly feel sorry for her. brbrGreat Job and keep writing!