Read this short excerpt, tell me what you think?!?!?!?!?

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Read this short excerpt, tell me what you think?!?!?!?!?
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I have been following your story since day one and I am still amazed at how well you write. GIRL, you need an agent ASAP so I can read this book already! I know you will go far in your career as a writer. brbrAs for the excerpt, i think its breathtaking. The way you can weave emotion through your sentence structure is true talent. I can feel the anguish Katia is feeling as she watches the flames devour her life and family. I truly feel sorry for her. brbrGreat Job and keep writing!